Just woke up this morning...
with you in my head.
Looked outside the window
Golden rays of the sun
had hit the neighbourhood
And I could feel a sparkle
somewhere in my mind space
I know it were you...
There was no wind blowing
But I saw something flipping
I am sure it was your black hair
Somewhat wet, undone, freed
Temperature was on a rise
My throat felt parched...
But not my eyes...
Well...Monsoon is in
Hope it will rain today...
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"My throat felt parched...
But not my eyes... "
good job :-)
i like such poems.. just directly tracending from mind.. not corrupted by form,words and artificial or elongated ideas( hope you didnt add anything otherwise it would have been more better, i suspect on 2nd para)..
@Bhaskar: it was unadulterated...pata nahi hum "creative" writing kab kar payenge!!!thanks for visiting.
So....
did it rain 2day??
@Aurindam: i knew for sure u'd ask this question...!!!
how??
ab ye mat bolna ki... u knew that i'd ask u this question as well!!.. [:p][:)]
wasn't it so obvious of u ???? [:D]
kaise??
ab is baar to atleast ye mat bolna ki... this question was obvious as well!!.. [:p][:)]
Grrr....abey ye blog hai...IM...err DM(delayed) nahi...[:X]
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